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Not bad.

Not a horrible dance/house track. I'd probably give it a go on a party playlist, just because the bass bumps quite nicely, and the melody is quite reminiscent of classic trance. At times, this almost has a Daft Punk feel to it, even.

That's not to say that this track doesn't have its problems. It's fairly repetitive...the bass is a little inconsistent, and every so often, I could swear that there's a (very small, almost imperceptible) time change between the melody and the bassline.

Other than those little gripes (that other people probably won't notice), it's groovy.

Krupinkin responds:

I am so happy to have a relevant response.... Thank you! Respect!

Randomize and drum machine do not mix well.

Your drum timing is off by about a half-second, when it starts - almost every time it stops and starts, in fact. The melody is quite repetitive, the synth sounds messy, as if it were just randomized for the most part, there's too much reverb, the bass from the synth (it sounds almost as if you used a "pac-man pellet" effect) interferes a lot with the underlying melody, and the guitar on here is horribly, terribly abrasive - and it feels just as randomized.

Half the time, the melody doesn't even really seem to mesh together right. Sorry, but all my 5 r NOT belong to this. (By the way - this is NOT heavy metal. Learn to categorize. If anything, it's a techno-rock hybrid - and that's stretching it. A lot.)

Drainar responds:

I'm actually very thankful that you told me what was wrong with my music. I'll try to fix that next time around.

Worth a listen if you like guitar.

Not a bad guitarist. Only once or twice did I hear any variation in tempo in each "stage" - at least, enough to be really noticeable.

Some people may be driven away because of the fact that it's a guitar track - especially by the harshness of the electric at times.

However - very interesting piece, seems quite true to the description of your "stages", as they were. If I didn't know better, I'd say that this was just a f*ck off session, maybe a little bit of trip thrown in - and the descriptions were probably written as a side-result. (Well, I don't know better.) But, nice job.

Naitzmic responds:

You know what, you're 101% correct, sir!
I just hit record and did an improvisation...
I did have that whole theme in mind as I was playing though,
so it wasn't something I pulled completely out of my ass.

Clever observation, none the less. ;D

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